Hi Ruby. You have used a range of different poetry forms and I really enjoyed the pictures behind your words. You obviously think about word choice when you are writing. Thanks for sharing your poems.
Hi Ruby! I am a Year Six student from South Hornby School, you have written brilliant poems, all of them are hilarious especially ‘The Fall’ - did you write it from prior experience? Next time you could focus on putting capital letters in the correct place. Here is my school blog address. Why don’t you check it out? (Right here)
Thanks for the comment Jaime I will definitely check your blog out. The Fall is a true story and I haven't written poetry ever before so it's a new thing for me. About the capital letters you actually don't need to put capital letters in poetry but thanks for the feedback.
Hi Ruby I am a student from South Hornby School I love all the great words and poems you did. I enjoyed reading and watching it especially like Horse Riding. Do you horse ride to?
Kia ora Ruby, I am a student from South Hornby School. I love you're anthology poem. I like the way you added similes and metaphors because it made it very detailed and descriptive. Also, is Bentley your dog, and is that a real picture of him? If you're interested here is a link to my blog- http://shsnatashaf.blogspot.com/
Hi Ruby I am a student from South Hornby School. I love all the great words and poems you did. I enjoyed reading and watching it especially like Horse Riding. Next time you should focus on putting capital letters in the right place.
Kia ora Ruby. I’m Lorelei from South Hornby School. I liked the way you have put everything all together that way. It sounds awesome and great. By the way is Bentley your pet? I like most of rhyming words that you have used.
Kia Ora my name is Matthew I am a senior student from South Hornby School. I like the your blog it is so fantastic. The storm story is so great and your writing is so neat. Great speech about Mcdonald’s. Is Bently your dog? I and is Bently your dog?
Hi Ruby. You have used a range of different poetry forms and I really enjoyed the pictures behind your words. You obviously think about word choice when you are writing. Thanks for sharing your poems.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby! I am a Year Six student from South Hornby School, you have written brilliant poems, all of them are hilarious especially ‘The Fall’ - did you write it from prior experience? Next time you could focus on putting capital letters in the correct place. Here is my school blog address. Why don’t you check it out? (Right here)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment Jaime I will definitely check your blog out.
DeleteThe Fall is a true story and I haven't written poetry ever before so it's a new thing for me.
About the capital letters you actually don't need to put capital letters in poetry but thanks for the feedback.
Hi Ruby I am a student from South Hornby School I love all the great words and poems you did. I enjoyed reading and watching it especially like Horse Riding. Do you horse ride to?
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie
DeleteThanks for the feedback.
I used to horse ride once but I haven't lately.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Ruby, I am a student from South Hornby School. I love you're anthology poem. I like the way you added similes and metaphors because it made it very detailed and descriptive. Also, is Bentley your dog, and is that a real picture of him? If you're interested here is a link to my blog-
ReplyDeletehttp://shsnatashaf.blogspot.com/
Hi Ruby I am a student from South Hornby School. I love all the great words and poems you did. I enjoyed reading and watching it especially like Horse Riding. Next time you should focus on putting capital letters in the right place.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ruby. I’m Lorelei from South Hornby School. I liked the way you have put everything all together that way. It sounds awesome and great. By the way is Bentley your pet? I like most of rhyming words that you have used.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora my name is Matthew I am a senior student from South Hornby School. I like the your blog it is so fantastic. The storm story is so great and your writing is so neat. Great speech about Mcdonald’s. Is Bently your dog? I and is Bently your dog?
ReplyDeleteHi Matthew
DeleteYes Bentley is my dog.
Thanks for the comment